February 10 2020
<strong>Good Good</strong><br /><br />When I started this story it was with excitement of getting a look at how Aquil and Lawlor not only got there start but how they became the men they e. The writer brings us right into the action and you are from then on. In the beginning you get two young men who became brothers and its not through blood but love and life. The writer paints us a picture of two men taking care of business and trying to navigate life. You're going to love this story because of the new love you will see and rekindled.Now my problem was all the typos,a second or third set of eyes is so important when turning out such a product as this. Overall it's good and their are moments when you laugh and give a long sigh.
October 22 2021
Aquil and Law are night and day lol ?. Law so laid back but he has snake in the grass with his son’s mother Zuri. Aquil is a live wire but I like him. He just need the right woman to bring out his love. <br /><br />Saige is naive in street smarts, but she could hold her own. Aquil got so many women in his roster it’s ridiculous SMH. He does not know how to show love due to childhood experiences.<br /><br />Bailee is cool and hoping she gets her man, but she also got stuff she had to deal with.<br /><br />Curtis is a pedo and waiting to see if he will be fed to monster and supper.<br /><br />For some reason when I first met Law and Aquil in another book I thought they were older like late 20s, but they only like 23. That’s baffling to me. Ooh well.
February 25 2020
<strong>Great story horrible editing</strong><br /><br />I wanted so badly to stop reading this story due to the horrible errors. It was hard to read, it was almost like no one edited this story at all. Due to the errors when the characters talked they seemed slow, because words would be missing or misspelled. Also there there was a lot of repetition, we get it Aquil was cold hearted because of his mother, law wanted a 2 parent home because of how he grew up.. and there were more. If the author rewrites this story or make sure part 2 is written correctly and get some editing done this would be a 5 star. Other than that I will leave a one star and this will be my first and last read by this author.
November 28 2019
<strong>AWESOMENESS</strong><br /><br />This whole book would Faillarr from the first page to the last page Entertaining DRAMA cannot wait for the next part Thisjust getting live but I'm telling you this author wrote this book and she got me all in from the first chapter I mean it just took off you could not put it down the STORYLINE the characters I love them the background stories I went on and out freaking standing
December 01 2019
<strong>I need part 2</strong><br /><br />Why you ended like this like I need part 2 ASAP I hope Aquil is ok and Lort he gone be even madder that Big L had a secret about his mom just when he was opening his heart to Saige I hope we get part 2 soon and your boom dont became a distant memory like others I have read part one to and haven't been getting a part 2 like the author don't exist anymore. That Black brothers and GMM is nothing to okay with things about to get real
January 31 2020
<strong>????</strong><br /><br />The cliff hangers really gone kill me one day, I be stressed out trying to make up an ending in my head ??♀️. This book was so good but I have questions!! <br />What happens to Aquil?<br />Is Zuri okay? <br />Where is her mom taking her son how you gone “kill” your daughter and then kidnap your grandson but run into the neighbor who seen you clear as day ? <br />Do they figure out they was robbed?
December 03 2019
<strong>Cliffhanger</strong><br /><br />Man I didn’t expect that cliffhanger after reading reviews but this book was so good. Law is such a good man. Faithful and loyal. Bai’lee is an asset to him and Logan. I can’t believe Zuri played her hand the way she did. Aquil is so damaged. Saige can melt the ice around his heart but at what cost? What is Big L’s secret? Great read!
February 10 2020
<strong>Allie Marie I need part 2 AsAp</strong><br /><br />Where do I start, this book is so good. The flow of the book was just that good . I like aquil and law so much. I love how law was not a hoe and loved his son. Don't know why this slow lady had to snatch Logan up people are just crazy all together. I hope they get kar, jasp, and Jeffrey. I hope the secret Big has does not destroy the family.
July 02 2020
<strong>Good book</strong><br /><br />I wonder what the secret that Big L is hiding, i can’t wait to find out. Zuri done got herself into a world of trouble when law find out that she help with that robbery and got her son kidnapped, i feel bad for her. I hope that Aquil is good just when Saige was going to forgive him he gets shot. Cant wait for part 2.
December 02 2019
<strong>Great read </strong><br /><br />Can’t wait for part two .. I hope all goes well with quil.. and Zurie just needs to die ... the book was really good and I enjoyed the storyline.. it did however have a lot of grammatical errors .. but overall it was still a great read